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"i dont know if its a bug or not"
but when a bullet got close but did not hit i got damage and when my boat ended up at the dead end it sudenly exploded for no reason at all, showing me the mission failed screen telling me i missed some enemies....about 3 or so
i quit from theire so i will not deduct or add any points
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so ill just give you a 5 and a ten and let you figure out the rest
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i have watched reboot 1-9 when i noticed reboot 10 was submitted just to remember how the story went again and to my suprise i noticed i missed a couple of episodes but all of them are superb and i wonder whats going to happen next
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that was kinda funny in its randomness :D
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you do need to work on your graphics tho
i noticed you tended to draw into the head you might want to avoid that, one thing you can try is using the line tool and circle tool for the stick men(if needed use paint or photoshop or some other grafics program) hand drawing tends to wobble allot
as far as i can see your a decent-pretty good animator but you need to work on background and most of all overall graphics
(if you want, i can try to help you with graphics for as much as i can.....witch aint alot, do note tho, i don't have flash myself anymore since the trial expired :P )
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the critique--and this is understandable. But sometimes I prefer the look of drawn stick figures than using the circle tool over and over again. I did use the circle tool at some points where drawing it would just become tedious--so I know what you mean.
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i have nothing against sprites naruto and things like that
now on to the review.
audio: its alright but no further coment
grafics: well theire not custom sprites so i cant realy say anything about it. but you should work a bit more on your drawing's of blood
animation: you need to work a bit more on keeping the moovement smooth, i keep seeing a sprite at one place and then half a second or so later he moved a bit to the left. try to make em slide, not teleport from place to place
text:its a bit hard to read, try making the text a collor that is in contrast to the background and make it somewhat thicker. its eazyer to read that way
effort: i think you put quite some effort into this so no point deduction for that
overall: 7/10 (on my voting scale its a bit lower then a average movie or game)
4/5
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as i can see quite some effort want into making this and the result is great. altho id love to see the bullet get stuck or explode when hitting the ground.
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"you, sir/madam did not even try....."
and for that the stars earned by the muisic were removed
why did you not try your best? im shure your able to make realy nice stuff.......if you just try!
Author's Response:
i know
but i dont have flash anymore
this was actually my first flash i ever made
i just got bored and submitted it
o yeah
im a guy
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"MAN you've got some skills with pixel art!"
not only that but your also good at flash.......i think I'm jealous.....even if its almost purely because of your pixel skills, i admire you.
p.s. how long did you take to get this good? 10 years?
Author's Response:
About a year and a half was my first attempt at Flash
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"theire is nothing whrong with the game but...."
theire is a limitation to how many buttons a keyboard will permit to be pressed and that is 2 while this game at times require's you to press 3 at a time and thats just not posible, i sugest making the ragdoll shoot constantly that or make the spacebar a on-off switch for shooting as that will probaly resolve that problem and diagnoal movement will be posible......that or just use the mouse to aim and shoot
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